Documentary update!

When I first began working on the documentary project I was a little confused about what to write about. But after we talked about it a couple of times in class I have started to understand the expectations and made some changes in my writing. At first, I didn't understand what the analysis was but now I've gotten a better understanding of it after talking about it in class. I’ve watched the movie again for more clarification on what to write. I was able to take some more notes on the parts of the documentary that I felt I needed more information on. Watching it a second time was good for me I noticed a lot of events and scenes that I didn't the first time.

Yet, I do not feel it is fully ready so I believe this week before Thursday I’m going to have to put some more work into my paper. I'm going to use what we went over in class and the notes I took from the movie to revise and make it better. I might have a classmate read it over again since the first time that helped me a lot. They were able to give me feedback on corrections I needed that I didn't even notice. But I do believe by Thursday I will feel confident to turn in the final copy



 

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